Many essays scored, and three years ago

As a college student, I have written a considerable amount of essays by now. But, everything was not as good as today (even though I don't think I have accomplished the highest level). Today, looking through my old files from high school, found some Spanish writings (which weren't as good as I thought they were by then), but also some English writings. I was horrible! I admit, everything was pretty messed up in my essay. But, enough of my actual words, let's go to my old ones...

It happened the last year, I was reading a horror book in my train’s compartment, when a nervious and extrange man get into without entry permit. I asked his name and what were he doing in the train, he answered me his name were Braulio. Then tell me that he doesn’t will be a lot time and in a few minutes he will be down the train, so I didn’t bring many attention.

I remember that were a rainly and cold day, then the train brake very extrange and fast, so that guy down train’s stairs, a little time after, i take a notice of that man stole my wallet, then i told it to the officers, and they said me the motive of why the train brake suddenly, cause that man were a thieving and the officers want to capturate him.

That was´nt funny, but i learn to be careful with my ownerships and to myself for extrange and suspect people, cause many of them want to make something mostly bad.


Like I said, pretty horrible. But it was three years ago, on the high schooler days.


Daniel James